Its a Good story but need more depth in the story and for each character and the world in itself and u could make some fillers with Side Quests im no writer so i can only give some small advice ðð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ð€©ðð€©
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