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Toirdelbach
ToirdelbachLv115yr
2019-09-09 07:01

Just letting everyone know before hand, the main character IS gender bent. Not just a trap, he plays as a FEMALE character. Not that that is bad, just a warning to let you know. It's not my cup of tea because of that and the writing is about average but, it's your call and I'm sure that there are many people that will love this story. Good luck, Author-san and I hope that your story is loved by many!

Lilim Heritage Online

DamnPlotArmor
4.6
259 Chs

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Toirdelbach
ToirdelbachLv11

But he doesn't turn into a girl IRL and there's no homo. The lower score is based off of writing quality mostly and world background secondly. I wouldn't allow myself to rate something badly based on personal preference. But I do have high standards for spelling, grammar and a logical world background.

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TheWiseOldMan
TheWiseOldManLv10

*MYA! Nom-Nom Mew! Meh. Mew. Meh-Heh-Heh.* (Listen up you wet bananas! I, the over 9000 INT Tama, is here to tell you all why you should read this or become my food! Also, you are required to give me your red powered jelly stone things for my efforts in writing this or I’ll make you not only a wet banana but a spilt one too! This story could be better if it was just about me hence only 4 stars for story development. My banana human is just that, a banana. Sometimes they have a wu-wu, others a wee-wee. Its weird, but ignore the boy trap and just focus on me, Tama. Some call me an eggcat, but those someones are bananas. I am a super awesome, all knowing foodie descendent from a dragon-like creature. Basically perfect, yeah. The world I live in is great! There all sorts of foods everywhere! Humans, zombies, green eggs, and ham? Tuna, snakes, scorpions, etc. My owner is abusive though and only feeds Tama the bare minimum, please call protective services for Tama before she starves to death! Author needs to write more so that Tama can show everyone how amazing they are in comparison to everyone else who are bananas. Author you banana, hurry up and give Tama more delicious foods and smarter humans. Poor Tama can only take so many bananas.. wait, that sounds wrong ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) heh-heh, banana Mish will take them in Tama’s place. But chop chop! *Mya-Nom-Nom!*

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DamnPlotArmor
DamnPlotArmor作者

I'd like to welcome men and women of culture to my nonsense story! Unlike my previous work, I'll be shameless for this novel. At first, I drafted this for the evolution writer contest. Afterward, I started writing this in order to relax and let my inner voice out into the world, so I can embarrass myself to death! I don't expect a good response because it might offend some people. But if it somehow gets more popular than my other work, I'll probably switch my priority into this work instead. Well, have fun! Meh! ... I meant MEAW!

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IWANTMYDINNER
IWANTMYDINNERLv10

to be honest at first I was a little turned off by the gender bender tag...but im a total sucker for sci-fi and video game novels so I caved in and read it. if you are on this page and are hesitant about reading it then FOR FUCKS SAKE DO IT ALREADY!! Seriously its great.

5yr
Zeferath
ZeferathLv15

Love for the story is all I feel it can be interact,evasive,alluring and keep you hooked I started and finished all that was released in a day a DAY that was how hard I fell for this nugget of diamond i found buried under the pretence of a bright future but I'm here to tell you it is worth reading now. Short and sweet

5yr
Kuran0666
Kuran0666Lv6

Sorry for a low star for updates. The story is good. I am strange because I like gender bender stories but straight. It's really interesting keep up the work! Thanks for the story! 😘💓💕

5yr
Jkesse
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Adypoker
AdypokerLv7

Only thing that I don't like in the novel is gender bending... ..................................................................................................................................................................................

5yr
Royal_13
Royal_13Lv4

Good stuff this. Though, it hasn't been updated for a month. Hopefully the author for comes back to this to finish it up. Apparently my review isn't enough characters long yet. Let me try to post again.

5yr
SupremeOverlord123
SupremeOverlord123Lv4

I’m rating it perfect because it’s about virtual reality games a good genre.👍👍👍👍👍👍.

5yr
xs4pp
xs4ppLv2

Well, Its kinda well written, but gender bender always freeking bothering me. I guess if there are no such thing, such as gender bender there will be many more readers will like or have interest on this novel, because many will hesitate for this genre, i dont know if he/she will turn a gay. Why dont you just make it girl or pure man, it will be a really good story, and the background of the is amazing, even til now im thinking of not to go on to the upper chapters, i just.like to when you create or make next time please make it friendly for all, because it is really annoying, i know for you i guess, its just a small issue/thing. But we cant admire a gay/or a guy dressing a girl clothes. Its making our brain hurt. Hahahah tnx btw. The story has good background, plot, and even my fav genre the gaming. But gender bender strike a good deal of stress to a reader like me. I think were quite many hahahaha anyway thanks, ill try to read for a few chap.

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