Review Detail of anne_2 in I Am The System #canceled#

Item: I Am The System #canceled#
Rating: 4.2

レビュー詳細

anne_2Lv55yranne_2

The story plot is good and characters design as well but but the way you write the convo and the person who converse made me confused maybe because its different form from what i have usually read. But this is only my opinion and so far its quite interesting. More power to you and write more😊

I Am The System #canceled#

M_T

1の人に「いいね!」しました

返信3

M_T作者M_T

thax , for your honest review.it really helped , I use English in academic writing only ,and trying to write like makes the writing more passive sentience . I will try and fix it 😄

5yr

anne_2Lv5anne_2

😊 you all have room for improvement. So as i...hehehe

5yr

anne_2Lv5anne_2

😊 you all have room for improvement. So as i...hehehe

5yr