Review Detail of RAGNAROC511 in Progenitor System

I enjoyed the story until chapter 13 when it went stupidly dark and insane. It was totally out of place with no for-shadowing. Also the main character is a former marine and cop that has died once already why oh why did he give in with NO resistance at all. I'm not saying get rid of that darkspawn or whatever it is but it doesn't fit in the story with the way you put it in. It's like BLAM your mother killed you out of nowhere kind of placement when your mom just proved she loves you not but a minute before. The monster was ok, placement in story wasn't, and the goblins just smiling wanting to die is nonsense.