Review Detail of DarkSideOfTheSpoon in Odd One Out

Alrighty tighty. It's been a while since I liked a small novel this much. This is the most intensive I can be. Writing quality: I see no flagrant spelling/grammar errors which means this has been through scrutiny and edited sufficiently. The bar is pretty low on this platform but you decided to backflip over it instead of just hop. Stability: No way to tell the release date so no way to know for now.. The only complaint is that so far there's too few chapters. Development: While there's not much going on so far, but you can tell that an arc is certainly present immediately. This shows a sense of showsmanship that's not present in the much longer stories. It just feels tactilely appealing. Character Development: This is good. The characters have character. Good. World background: Just the smallest bit an info dump. Not in a negative way either. It's easy to digest. Compact. You know what's going on. Overview: Tasty. No real issues, its got a compelling plot and theme. The delusions of the main character. The system being a player in almost all potential acts. This is a story that I want told. Take my power stones and continue this story (I don't have any left today...). Some notes: Cover art is iffy (probably should change it once the novel blows up.) Good story!