Review Detail of CouchPotatoDandy in Marvel Invincible Talisman

I dropped the fanfic on the first five chapters, the translation and editing is done terribly. The MC is making mistakes wherever he goes, wearing disguise and forgetting he has the power to be invisible, showing his face the first time he goes out as of vigilante and immediately after telling someone his true name while begging her to not tell his secret, etc... Let's just say I lost interest very fast.