Review Detail of CrimsonDarkLord in In the marvel/DC world with the absorbtion ability

Good idea but the execution is bad. I know you trying to introduce characters from DC, but in cold open really? Ok readers here's Batman try to imagine Him in earth 616 or MCU, like WTF?😑👏 meme review. Don't get me wrong I'm a big fan of Batman. But what kind of Batman? What Kind of Batman are we talking about is this the traditional Batman your introducing? Or the sinister type of Batman that kills everybody(The Batman Who Laugh). Or drug addicted Batman with superhuman strength. There's a different kind of Batman. Even in Flashpoint Thomas Wayne is the batman. Out of nowhere, I'm Batman!🕵 My point is your introduction sucks ball. Cardboard copy. (Authors mind ) Heres a popular character let put this in the story his presence alone would better my story right? NOPE, Your 4ucking wrong! Author Let me ask you u what did Batman do in your story??????? At less hype the character your introducing. Not just cold open tv drama bullsHit. This is a novel type of medium no need to rush your work. It's called characterization and use it, you need it.