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Get an editor, try to slow down the plot... I feel like a lot of it was super rushed. The addition of Batman and his role in the helicarier was minimal and not written properly. I feel like if you do want to introduce other characters like batman, superman, etc you need to do it a lot slower and smoother. That's just my opinion. I do like the story, it just feels really rushed. I did not mind the training time skip, but in chapter 19 it felt like other than the hulk fight everything else was like 2 lines and situation over. Ofc you assume people have watched the movie so they know what happened but still maybe going more into detail what Tony and captain America did would've engrossed me more. Sorry for the rant
In the marvel/DC world with the absorbtion ability
pierreleloup
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honestly other than the speed i think you are doing a good job, I really enjoyed reading every chapter and I hope despite the negativity you might receive that you continue to keep writing since it would be a shame to not be able to read your novel :)
pierreleloup:I know that the story feels pretty rushed up and I'm sorry, I will try to slow down the evenements, maybe rewrite some chapters... Thanks for the review and the analysis.
Don't worry I don't plan to leave this story in a corner of my brain I will publish it and when I don't have any idea anymore I will write another one in a different universe
NexisX:honestly other than the speed i think you are doing a good job, I really enjoyed reading every chapter and I hope despite the negativity you might receive that you continue to keep writing since it would be a shame to not be able to read your novel :)