I have to say I really like the novel. The world building, characters, and events are all planned out which makes fitting in your own character a challenge but not as much as say creating everything from scratch. Unfortunately I can't continue reading it due to poor grammar, spelling mistakes, and what feels like misinterpreted English translations which often leads to what I believe is the wrong intention for some sentences or even entire paragraphs. I hope your writing becomes better and if it does I'll hop back on board because your imagination is amazing! Keep it up, I look forward to your progress.
pierreleloup
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