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I'm the author so of course I review the story with 5 stars even if I know that it's a lot less... Maybe because I'm French and my writing skill need a lot of improvement. Let's just hope that you will like the story. Leave reviews, give stone if you like the story... And enjoy
In the marvel/DC world with the absorbtion ability
pierreleloup
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DragonkingKyo:is this going to be a harem?(I always ask this as I love harems) or any romance at all?
well all you have to do is make sure the girl fall in love with him for a reason rather then instantly from seeing him as that what most people hate(I myself don't mind that too much) and as for the destroying the story part you need to work it into the story and not focus to much on it that is the reason some say harem destroying the story is that author forgot the plot and focus only on the harem when you need to merge them that and in most harems the girl are useless so you need to make them integrated with the plot
pierreleloup:Maybe harem of I can write it correctly without destroying the story
pierreleloup:Maybe harem of I can write it correctly without destroying the story
pierreleloup:Maybe harem of I can write it correctly without destroying the story
