Review Detail of JallaDoodle in System in Dragon Marked War God(DMWG)

Writing quality could be a lot better, the amount of mistakes with he/she/his/hers and all those are a lot. There is also the cultivation realms problem if anyone has read DMWG you will get some brain disease if you read this fanfic., like you could have searched on google for the realms to make it better. That isn’t the worst part though this whole fanfic is literally like the mc(that reincarnates from earth) takes the place of DMWG’s mc(Jiang Chen) and I mean literally the script is practically a copy and paste from the original only the name changes from Chen to Xiang. So the character development was bad, nothing really original and the story development could have been so much better it felt a little rushed and it didn’t change anything from the original. It was pretty disappointing and underwhelming now I this could have had good potential but it was badly done sadly.