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Noleafyet
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Interesting premise loaded with a lot of potential. Hmnn, what can I help you with. Let's see. The author can polish the the work more by showing and not telling. E.g furious - how furious show us what she looked like - furrowed brows, etc. Anyway, may the author write more, edit more, and learn more.

Thorns of the Forgotten Rose

Panqiuyan

1の人に「いいね!」しました

いいね

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Panqiuyan
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thank you