Review Detail of Knossos in Above All

Item: Above All
Rating: 4.4

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KnossosLv45yrKnossos

Only some minor awkward wording, grammar issues, etc. Besides those small mistakes, the book is, in all honesty, a nice read. I enjoyed what there is so far. Dialogue and creativity are good.

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Asphant

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Asphant作者Asphant

If I may ask, what chapter was it with an awkward wording? Really wanna change it, thanks for this

5yr

KnossosLv4Knossos

The mistakes are so small they might be in every chapter-- a missing comma here, not using the right word. You should skim over your stuff with grammarly, it helps me with that stuff.

5yr