Story at the beginning didnt have good grammar but later on the story got better and better, you should just ignore those that hasn't even read the recent chapters. Like after the few 10-20 chapters, there was a significant change in how the story was written. The beginning was bad but author tried and got better. Unlike those people who don't appreciate anything
DrunkenShadow
4の人に「いいね!」しました
いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!