Review Detail of DeJeL in Sorcerer King

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: Error in chapter 5, pointed out in comments. Poor update stability. Feels more like an informational book than a story... maybe try to incorporate any information you need to give in dialogue between characters with exception to ascetic descriptions.;,;. Positive Feedback: Nice plot concept, and you do develop your characters well despite your shortcomings. Personal Feedback: I thought you did decently well, however, this novel is not really my cup of tea, so I will not be continuing to read it... keep up the hard work.;,;.