Review Detail of JustAnotherPerson in Journey of the Wand less Mage

This story is meets the standards for now. But, the quality of writing could be better. You also need more experience with writing a story. A more detailed character design and plot would be also be good. We should also, get a better understanding of the world in the near future. But, I like this story a lot, so please continue and remember, this is your first story so just try to improve and grow. Good luck, I'll be rooting for you.☺️👍📖