The story is interesting; however, the author writing skill is mediocre... A lot of confusion and time skipping. The layout and is a bit unclear. The story contains some humor, but the story itself does not float well... It is a decent novel, hope The Author skills can improve and bring the novel up a few notch.
KingQazi
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!