Review Detail of MrTheory in The Era of Evolution

It's a good story with an interesting idea I just feel like your drawing it out wayyyy to much I understand you want to explain everything to make it easier to understand but when you take over a month of uploading and 30 chapters and they haven't even started anything yet it gets boring I'm not trying to be over critical just giving my opinion I would suggest you doing longer chapters as to avoid using to many chapters and updates for a single concept