Review Detail of BludyMaNa in Ghost Knight
レビュー詳細
Author has a bad understanding of English, it's like reading a machine translated novel but not as hard to comprehend, you can still understand and comprehend what's going on... most of the time. The story feels like it's written very haphazardly without much thought behind what they want to do next, with events happening at random. Every character feels like their entire existence is meant for the main character. The main character feels like they are trying to come off as a leader or badass, but failing. the poor English does not help. i still sorta like the story though, even though i gave it a low rating. also this is my first review so i don't know if it's a good review...
Ghost Knight
Gamehotel
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The review is well done as I said at the beginning of the novel this character had a hard life and nothing pleasant in terms of killing without sense I think you're right not to give any sense a bandit or monster for the main character are the same basically a threat depending on how they act is how the actions are developed. and some of the secondary characters are revolving around the main character but also later in side stories I put the events that led them to meet each other so it is also understood little by little how it was created and also why the existence of the Dwarves seems to be unknown.
I regret the problem of bad English is that I do not have much of the basic knowledge in English (currently I always hate English because I never understood a word :C) I also started taking grammar classes in English to improve so that's why this week I did not publish anything besides my pc decided to break