Review Detail of IsaChiu in Mystery Magic

This book is a bit rough around the edges, but it seems to have something good at the core of it. I think with a bit more polishing this could be a really good book. However, the thing that bugs me the most is that the character seems to lack a motive other than just curiosity. It’s doesn’t seem like she needs to rediscover magic if her people are doing well. Perhaps if someone she loved was ill or dying and the only way to cure them would be magic, then sure. But if Emily is only seeking her own glory in a whim, I wonder if she will burn out quickly once the adventure isn’t exciting anymore. Anyways, I believe the author will be able to pull out some of her own magic to make this story work. Best of luck!