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no shame in reviewing your own novel I hear. a few useful things: a klick is defined as one kilometer a day on Vastitus is 34.5 hours what the names mean: Narchean- no meaning Buvin- possibly means the name of my god but I can't confirm that, it is normally a surname Jaku- means "me" and is also the name of a mountain in india Yalson- no meaning Ruby- a stone with many color varieties Kitt- a mountain in arizona Io- named after the moon of jupiter this is a story I am writing for fun, it is a military fiction/ science fiction novel based on a dream that I had one day. it features fighting, a decent story, OP characters, more fighting, betrayal, corruption greed, and of course, even more fighting.
Vastitus, Failure Planet
Lieutenant_Jaku
Liked it!
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Well that's not what it is (well that was sorta the original plan though) but I hope you can enjoy it anyway
TigerBlooImmortal:The title dosent really fit the synopsis which confuses me, I was hoping for a book about a young God or someone who have to survive on the damaged planet and help it become better. You know?
TigerBlooImmortal:The title dosent really fit the synopsis which confuses me, I was hoping for a book about a young God or someone who have to survive on the damaged planet and help it become better. You know?
Please use your imagination. Failed plant? Obviously messed desolate, but it says planet so it involves the whole planet aka the owner of suck planet:god. The the main reason is my wish for such genre
shadoX:How the heck did you get that from the title
TigerBlooImmortal:Please use your imagination. Failed plant? Obviously messed desolate, but it says planet so it involves the whole planet aka the owner of suck planet:god. The the main reason is my wish for such genre
TigerBlooImmortal:Please use your imagination. Failed plant? Obviously messed desolate, but it says planet so it involves the whole planet aka the owner of suck planet:god. The the main reason is my wish for such genre
TigerBlooImmortal:Please use your imagination. Failed plant? Obviously messed desolate, but it says planet so it involves the whole planet aka the owner of suck planet:god. The the main reason is my wish for such genre
shadoX:Because the author has been feeling sad that no one is reading his book
shadoX:Because the author has been feeling sad that no one is reading his book
shadoX:Because the author has been feeling sad that no one is reading his book
TigerBlooImmortal:Tell him to make the description better, is it fantasy, wuxia, xianxia, etc..... Gimme something
Lieutenant_Jaku:actually I dont really care but thnks anyway, you should write more for your book, im still waiting