Review Detail of Djablok in An Average Guy In A Shinobi World

Everyone has their own preference and I respect your opinion. thank you for your feed back :)

Ahh yes, i see that in allot of japanese light novlles

I actually prefer it the way the author does it, makes it easier to read, and less redundant with having "so and so asked" or "so and so said" so frequently, As a reader it lets me quickly see who's saying what and focus more on what's being said. but like the author commented everyone has their own preference and I respect yours.

Before I read this I was wondering will he have the sharingan

hahaha nope... my title is average =))

Wow that was nice of u to value a users opinion and just because of that I'm gonna support u. U HAVE MY ROCKS

I like the said and asked bc we can skiped the ending as we can tell who is talking but for those that dont its helpful for them while the : it causes most people to read the beginning and it gets kindof annoying to always read whos talking when you alrdy know whos talking thats why some novels skip the said when two people are having a conversation as you wont have to repeat yourself its like always say jack when u can use he but all in all its only for efficiency as peps like to do things efficient and fast

I don't think that'll be much of a problem... It'll feel like a script though... Makes me miss writing plays...

I think this is good author would appreciate ur criticism as in Criticism= u took ur time think about the novel Thumbs up

If the author ia doing that, he could do what cormac mcarrthy does someone and just have dialogue without attributing it

Its cool that way too And " " she said is likely in chinese novel thats where i mostly see it