Review Detail of Heaven_Dream in Einder Bloodline

Nice story. I like it! Keep up the good work. I just noticed some things that might help you. First, you must build a world background introducing the world of your novel to the audience. The look of the world of Cray, the era and some other thing. I guess you know what I'm saying. You must also try some proofreading especially the grammar and punctuation errors. Despite these. Your work is a good read. The story is gripping. Keep it up. Good luck