Review Detail of hanoikimchi in Red Thread of Fate

Item: Red Thread of Fate
Rating: 2

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hanoikimchiLv116yrhanoikimchi

The story might be interesting, but the grammar is off-putting. Will give 2 stars for now, hopefully it gets better. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Red Thread of Fate

AidaHanabi

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AidaHanabi作者AidaHanabi

Hi Hanoikimchi, thank fot ur comment. Can u tell me where is my mistakes? So I could fix it. It's in the summary or in chap? Thank u

6yr

hanoikimchiLv11hanoikimchi

Hi Aida, as much as I would like to help there is no copy-paste function on the app (of course that’s a given since plagiarism is bad XD) so I suggest you get an editor. Some examples are: instead of wrenching it should be wrenches Lighting continue- lighting continued Etc..

6yr

AidaHanabi作者AidaHanabi

Oh okay thank u for telling me. Hehe. Well I just found someone yesterday to help me. But, look like we still over look it. Thank u

6yr

snow_fairyqueenLv11snow_fairyqueen

I agree with you.

6yr