Review Detail of Hokobishu in Rolf the Barbarian Battlemage

While the author has designed a clear world for our character, as of writing this, the latest update was 22 days ago. I for one, would love to see more of this. Rolf is a smart kid with dumb ideas, your typical teenaged protagonist, but at least he tries to defy his situation instead of accepting it. Now the author has used some very nice descriptions in their story, but could use a little bit of polish or reread what they wrote. Sometimes the wrong words are used or a phrase is input improperly. Not that it detracts from the story overall if you understand what you're reading. It just funny little quips like that that make me look forward to the next chapter. Overall its pretty decent and I hope the author continues making more even though they are busy translating other novels such as Tempest of the Battlefield. Good luck to you, Author-san.