Hooshu
Lv5
No such thing as absolute.
2017-08-13 入りましたRomania
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Hooshu1yrコメントPlural for life is Lives, not Lifes. And instead of Lifes continue, "Life goes on" might be better
"Let's forget about it. I don't care about that incident nowadays. Lifes continues, and there are plenty of girls out there that might fit old me, quite well. There's so many gorgeous women in this world that also have bright personalities, caring, loving, why would we be stuck with some specific girl? Love? Don't get me started."- Hooshu1yrコメント
"had a troubled" might work better
His little brother, Chris, was having a troubled expression initially, as if he was pondering about something, and without bothering him, leaving him to his thoughts, unexpectedly heard him open about something that made him frown. - Hooshu1yrコメント
"city adorned with" might work better
As he was watching the city ornamented with the Christmas ornaments from the large windows with no major changes this year too, a journey back home on the bus that in his mind was normal, it didn't stay normal, since his little brother had something to remark. - Hooshu3yrコメントCh 2045 Structure, Authority, and Relief
- Hooshu3yrコメントCh 2038 A Fateful Encounter...?
- Hooshu3yrコメントCh 71 Monster Wave
- Hooshu3yrに返信 HooshuCh 66 Announcement
- Hooshu3yrコメントCh 55 Chapter 55 The New Girl
- Hooshu3yrコメントCh 1856 Perception
- Hooshu3yrコメントCh 57 Coup (1)
- Hooshu3yrコメント
Ein's foresight is not any better at certain moments. Especially that PC. :kek:
As if to emphasize his point, blood began to flow from Gandr's nostrils, prompting Vahn to instantly sever the connection. In retrospect, he realized he should have returned to normal rather than allow Gandr to connect to his Realm self, but, as was often the case, hindsight was twenty-twenty. - Hooshu3yrコメント
Hope you get well soon. Best of luck :)
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