baoxiashun19
Hi everyone Im 22 a beginner in writing stories and only have a normal hobby of staying at my house while reading some books and watching some anime I'm also called as TheLost One
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baoxiashun192 years agoに返信 BLANKENDRKThank you for the feedback, I'm glad you like my story and don't worry I have no plans on dropping it.
- baoxiashun192 years agoに返信 alladinmothefuca
Maybe this is a part of a much bigger conspiracy.
この段落は削除されました。 - baoxiashun192 years agoコメント
supernormal? the author should other terms.
- baoxiashun193 years agoコメント
He already has his own consciousness even though he was just a sperm?
- baoxiashun193 years agoに返信 Gizmo_48
I mean nearest city. The reason why I wrote city instead of a town or village is that if they, the people of Florentine city would need to evacuate that place they can only come to the nearest city because a town or village won't be able to support a large volume of people. But it doesn't mean that there wasn't any town or villages nearby it's just that on the huge portion of land own by the Beaufort family there was only 1 main city which is the Florentine city because most of the land that was granted to them by the kings occupied the vast land of enchanted forest.
- baoxiashun193 years agoに返信 Gizmo_48
To reach Florentine city they literally need to travel in the middle of a forest although there were tracks made for their wagons it still wasn't enough for them to have a smooth ride once in a while due to rapid growth of plants they will found obstacles on their path that they need to clear on their own so they need to stop once in a while but if its a lone knight like Hugo or Hubert they can reach the nearest town within two or 3 days. The only reason why they took more time to reach the nearest town is due to their baggage and carriage.
- baoxiashun193 years agoコメント
they aren't ordinary human to begin with Florentine city is like a military camp were everyone is almost train to become a knight although they weren't able to advance in strength to become a junior knight they still have train theirselves to become an apprentice knight which makes them consumes more food than normal. Growth of plants is also much faster than other places thanks to the influence of enchanted forest.
- baoxiashun193 years agoに返信 Abhishek_Byju_13o3
Well you kinda get the gist of it.
この段落は削除されました。 - baoxiashun193 years agoコメント
I'm starting to feel like this is a poisonous novel should I forget all my rationality before reading this because some of his actions are really dumb and unnatural.
- baoxiashun193 years agoコメント
he transmigrated but hr already knows the people in this new world? that's so sudden
