Why leave evidence? Feels like it was done for plot rather than the MC actually making a mistake leaving bones around.

'I can fix her'

I get the power fantasy, but honestly I feel a little disappointed when the constraints of a given premise is broken just 'because'. Lion turtles giving bending makes sense, but the system giving it is somewhat distasteful. A better alternative would have been to have Aang die off within the ice, making the MC the Avatar; or him passing the spirit (for insert reason here) that makes him the Avatar to the MC. Even getting the opposing spirit (I think it's Raava) to aquire the rest of the bending.

Lads, it's soon to be a goodbye. Good luck finding stories you'll like. Godbless.

Very unfortunate, with the quality and storyline of this work a 'word count' page is never needed. I'm not calling this story the greatest thing since sliced bread, however it's miles apart from the trash I put up with to sate my addiction, some of which stay quite high on the top charts.

bet.

Switch to strength and endurance training. Tone down the hypertrophy focused exercises.

Fighting is for those who can't just yoink the enemies' soul and twist it into a pretzel.

While having some strength to back his 'I am the strongest' attitude, he's still not committing, while laying low is fine, and advantageous even. As readers knowing both his true thoughts and seeing his actions make it feel like he is stifled, almost hypocritical even. A fish too big for the pond he's is but not strong enough to move to a bigger pool. Like wearing clothes that are too tight after warning gains from working out but you don't have the money to get new clothes that fit you. Very uncomfortable, making others think your trying to show off while lacking the casual confidence of knowing your efforts have paid off.

Just saw that chapter 15 is FFnet's chapter 5. Where do I go for your most recently updated fics?

+1

Do have higher tier options for those that just wanna support you, if people want to give you extra money just have a way to accept it happily. oh and use Ko - fi, they take ~4.50 flat per month, Pat takes 8%, as long as you make over 60 dollaridoos Ko - fi is better

Have different release speed. For every 1 webnovel chapter there will be 2 for the 3$ and 3 for the 10$. That way your webnovel posts have a solid backlog that you can schedule to post 1 chap a day + (Stone Goals), and your supporters get more frequent updates.

3-10 dollars for 5 - 10 fixed number of chapters stops people who just wants to read from supporting as after the 10 chaps they will still have to wait the same amount of time for the next chapter once caught up

This is pronounced 'pain tolerance'

*insert complaint here*

Degrees? Radian?

Nick has a reason for laying low, and I doubt he'd expose is full strength, might go for cunning strategy or even advanced spells but would probably prefer to keep his full accomplishments on the down low. Additionally he'd still try to win cuz of ambition and status necessity in Slytherin.