Addicted to novels, what else is there to say?
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This character has zero ambitions for glory, and somehow has fought and killed hundreds of people at a time (on multiple occasions) with nothing but a steel pipe? If that's not plot armor I don't know what is. Considering this is at least somewhat a form of reality and hasn't escalated to cultivation, mystical powers, or high-tech weaponry, that idea is unfeasible and unbelievable even with the most avid of imaginations. THAT is plot armor. I can beat the world with just a steel pipe - does that sound right to you? I'm not replying anymore. As I said before, I sincerely hope your work achieves greatness and all that you hoped it would. I would highly recommend acquiring an editor to assist you with the grammar. Good luck!
Just you repeating the same things in your reply, over and over tell a story about the grammar. But seriously, I honestly wish you the best of luck! I hate mcs that are too op, I hate mcs who are way too lucky, and I have a minor ocd for decent grammar. The story simply wasn’t my cup of tea.
So with the exception of the American family, all the others (particularly the staff members/workers) are all Chinese? Riiiight...
There was potential for evolution on other planets, maybe with more energy. But he criticized them for being too caught up in greed, vanity and violence, and also only barely making it to the moon let alone the stars.
Telling an American they speak English well? Alright, I’ll bite.
I tried, albeit barely. Poor grammar is a huge turn-off for me. On to the next waste of brain cells!
I was pretty sure English was the most popular/used language, and I was correct. A quick google search tells me English is the most common language, followed closely by Mandarin. I'm actually really surprised to see Hindi as third. Neat, you learn something every day.
The author himself claimed that once Di Di began cultivating no one would be able to sense or discover she had special eyes. Retcon or convenient forgetfulness?