mercurystarshipWTF

Hi, first thanks for the chapter. Secondly the "new giant LED screen on the building's exterior wall" is at this point of the Story not possible. For LED screens there was a piece of technology missing for a long time: Blue LEDs with enough brightness. There where invented sometime in 1993 by Shuji Nakamura at the Nichia Corporation. Funnily enough it was an employee of an then small time chip manufacturer. It is now one of the biggest, if not the biggest manufacturers of blue and white LEDs. The employee got like a warm handshake for it and is now in America.

It started off well but around chapter 20 the plot stopped making sense to me. Maybe it gets better in the later chapters, but right now I’m just confused.

What the hell is any of this even supposed to mean?

No offense, but I feel like writing a character on NZT-48 is impossible because the writer has to actually be as smart as the character 💀

Oh no, he’s gonna end up like another bum.

Sis, that’s just Akro Bake.

I see where it’s going. Lol.

If he doesn’t gamble like Toji did, I think he’ll be alright.

Honestly, it’s getting ridiculous. He needs to stop collecting every named female character like a Pokemon and actually focus on the family he already has. If he’s that desperate for new bloodlines, he should just let his kids marry them. He needs to step up as a father and a husband instead of just hunting for the next 'wife'.