Bitchy_Mochi

Luck Dao, then the author multiple times changed these two Daos as it seems fit…..

Not to be disrespectful as I enjoy the novel, can’t you make it less obvious in the plot? Why the hell would the thief keep this treasure for 2 years if he can you it themselves? If there is a reason for that, we can include a dialogue about it. And this coincidentally convenient timing for the start of the search… Can’t we just make it a petty grudge of Dulce’s in burying the MC alive adn searching for that reason? These small amendments would probably change nothing but make the plot more consistent and reasonable. No offense, I’ll keep on reading [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

How can they still track him? He’s removed the mark…