Izumo_Tenka

the narration is good, but i have some questions- maybe if this will be a spoiler don't answer it is the plague global? is the mc op? anyways the only thing i can point out is atleast update twice a week to attract more readers,

good start, is the mc op?

I'll try to mass produce

I noticed how deep the story is, and that girl who seduced the mc.. i kinda like her. Things to improve- you can use some cliffhangers to make your story interesting, I also like the dialogues, it sounds natural

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The plot is pretty good, its like that anime I watched before where she summoned a demon too. But I noticed that the story revolves only at the 2 characters, and i don't still have a clue on what are the goals of the demon or the boy... or maybe because its still at chapter 7. anyways the plot and story is interesting

I really admired the style of narration- you keep using simple words for everyone to understand the story better, and it is also a coincidence that I really love survival genres!!

thanks man!!

Hello, honest review. The concept and plot is good, as well as the power systems, and the world building is great, but there is one only problem..... the language you used is not easy to understand. Well i understand it pretty well, but if you want to reach the heart of many people, you can use simpler terms in your narration.

Hello, honest review. The concept and plot is good, as well as the power systems, and the world building is great, but there is one only problem..... the language you used is not easy to understand. Well i understand it pretty well, but if you want to reach the heart of many people, you can use simpler terms in your narration.