Malyna_Kamina

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Well I schould probably start I was inkompetent back then and am now rewriting this Review I do not really know if I can say anything as I have only read about 10 chapters but I really just wabt to share my opinion. So the first around 3 chapters were pretty good where his backstory was explained it mad sense and really hit me from the start on out. But from the time on where he comes into the school it just gets really weird with all of These characters and he is already being bullied from the first day the reasons are reasonable I guess but then his friend.. He seems so unnotiable to the point where I cant even remembeer his name and did we meet this secpnd male lead yet? The characterroles werent that speciefied but exept for that and the kinda confusing Storyline its a pretty okay book.

For the start I really like this book and am already fangirling for the author I have read this book for quite some time cause im poor and fastpasses are tight... so Well onto the actual Review I really like the writing style generally speaking stories out of 3rd person are always good and enjoyable... I sometimes cannot really Tell who who is if im being honest I always thought that Rise was the white haired one but I really dont know anymore but maybe thars a skillissue on my part. for anyone checking it out it is infact really good but sometimes there are some mistakes with the names but it iant that bad cause you can kinda determine who does what... overall really solid book keep going Frau. Author :)

I love this book the overall setting is mysterious and I already like The relationship between the two Main characters even this early on. the one sad thing is...I cant read that much cause im broke and have noo coins please give me more then 41 chapteeerrrrssss

You have really good Ideas I like them the topic about New worlds, New beliefs and New societies also sparks my interest even though something like that can be quiet difficult.. I myself am a starting autor so do not take what I say as granted but keep up the good work and believ in yourself