Rodrigo_Natsuki

Good afternoon my friend, sorry for the delay in posting anything and chapter, I ended up staying with my father for Christmas and ended up making an agreement with him to work until the 30th of this month. Not to mention that I just took a break from my other job, which I will return to on the 6th. Well, now for what interests you, I should be able to release the first chapter on the 30th or 31st (I'm sorry, I have no idea what my work will be like with my old one, so I don't know when I'll have time to write), because due to the lack of time and the delay in translating into English. I know that the webnovel has the reader translating it into their own language, but I've gotten used to translating and posting it in English.

I intend to make the first chapter five thousand to seven thousand words, even though I'm used to chapters with more than seven thousand words

I'm redoing the story, sorry for not warning.

Good afternoon my friend, sorry for the delays, I've been working like crazy to pay the bills at home, so I don't have time to write, as I do it in my native language and then translate it into English. Not to mention the few hours of sleep, so, I'm sorry, I don't have a scheduled date for releasing the next chapter, but I think I can write it, this Tuesday or Wednesday.

Don't worry, I won't give up or stop writing the other novel, I just wanted to take a break from it after the fourth chapters and I'm tired of the work hehe. I decided to start a project I had worked on before but didn't like the result. Anyway, chapter five of the other story is almost done, so it should be out on Friday or Saturday.

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Thanks for the comment, I should post the next chapter on the 13th or 14th, as I'll be on vacation then. Updates end up taking a long time because I've had a very tight schedule for the last few days hehehe

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First of all, thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts and suggestions. I truly appreciate feedback from readers, as it helps me improve the story. I understand your concerns about the character purchasing system and the protagonist's progression. I'm always looking for ways to make character development more engaging and dynamic, and your suggestion of gaining power through practice is something I’ll definitely consider for future updates. Regarding Masaki's inclusion, I understand it might seem like a surprising choice. There are specific reasons for her appearance that will be developed further in the plot. However, the idea of introducing high-level Sternritters is intriguing and could add an extra layer of complexity and exploration into Quincy lore, which is something I’ll carefully consider. Once again, thank you for your detailed feedback. I’m committed to improving the fanfic and making the reading experience increasingly enjoyable for everyone.

Hello, thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I’m glad you enjoyedthe initial chapters, but I understand that the current chapter might not have been as enjoyable for you. This fic is actually more of an experiment. In fact, the protagonist’s powers were chosen randomly using a wheel with several character names. I’m trying out different ideas and approaches, stepping away from conventional patterns, but I realize this might confuse or even alienate some readers. You’re absolutely right in pointing out that the more fanfics we read, the more predictable things can become. So, I completely understand your dissatisfaction with certain parts, and I appreciate you highlighting that. I’ve noticed that this issue has been brought up a few times in the comments, especially regarding some of the plot decisions. This has made me consider the possibility of rewriting the story entirely, keeping what works and adjusting what doesn’t. I hope that future chapters, or perhaps a revised version of the fic, will better suit your expectations. Thank you for following along so far and for sharing your honest opinions. They are essential for me to grow as a writer! This fic was created as an experiment to explore how a self-insert story could work, especially since most of the ones I’ve read were extremely boring and, to some extent, even offensive. They often lacked any real sense of danger or stakes in the narrative. I’ve always found the concept of self-inserts fascinating, but I understand why they’re viewed so negatively by many. This reputation stems from common tropes like overpowered protagonists, harems, lemon scenes, and the like, which can make the story feel shallow or self-indulgent. My goal was to take a different approach and challenge those conventions, creating a self-insert that feels grounded, with genuine struggles and consequences.