Dipak_Patel_4131

Man this feels like a chapter from 'taking mafia to magic world by Rv_1998' if I remember correctly as it tells a similar situation with mc being the mafioso familia boss!

oh yeah you just did it man, gave mc a resonable impactful and meaningful timed powerup but I have to ask is the meeting or exchange as the primodial said similar from LOTM like the meetings on monday in serafif castel???

Sir goldenstache I really liked the novel so far but I do recommend you to have some side quests or sub stories that later bunch up and make it big and important like how anvelope did for 'I'll surpass the mc ' or like in 'Jackal amongst snakes' .I also highly recommend for side quests to have more actions like you did for the gang conquest as I consider your forte to in building up and executing a thrilling battle even if its one sided annihilation by the mc.Or have new innovation by mc in the branch of aether and arcana like Inala from I'll surpass the mc or Lucien Evans from throne of magical arcana though I understand that Emir is the battle junkie a niche touch of brillance wouldn't hurt right?! Anyways thank you for the new perspective and keep up the good work and create great novels like cuttle fish that loves diving or En_trailji or ergen or harold , etc authors