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Chiemezuo_8904

Chiemezuo_8904

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2024-10-07 入りましたGlobal
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  • Chiemezuo_8904
    Chiemezuo_8904a month ago
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    yo it's really not that deep, the MC could literally sell toothpicks and the author would still say that the whole white house was studying it due to how innovative of an idea it is

  • Chiemezuo_8904
    Chiemezuo_8904a month ago
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    I first of all want to say that the initial idea for his golden finger was really good and really out of the box when compared to what other MC's are given though the issues I have with are an inconsistency in the fact that in his first world travel he was able to instantly improve the techniques he saw with no prior background in martial arts with no reason being given as to why but the had to comprehend everything else on his own, and while that isn't much my main issue with the story is that the protagonist does not seam like a real person, the only thing he knows how to do is cultivation, getting resources to cultivate and going to place to cultivate better I've literally read about robots with more of a personality than him, if living is about the diverse experiences we go through then the MC might as well be dead so even though I wouldn't go as far as calling trash I do believe that there is a lot to improve on