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It looks fine, but when I tried editing the chapter, for some reason, everything was bunched together. I’ve already fixed it, though. Strange.
1) Technically, yes, it is a harem, but it’s something that will develop as the chapters progress, along with the introduction of more characters. 2)Honestly, I’m not sure how to properly explain Desmon’s strength. What’s clear is that he currently doesn’t have full control over his demonic energy. However, in the upcoming chapters, he’ll acquire a new Devil Arm, which will be quite powerful. 3, 4, and 5) I’m someone who believes that romantic relationships need proper development; getting to know each other, spending time together, and more. A romantic relationship isn’t about meeting for a few minutes or seeing each other occasionally and then jumping into bed to "chat," only to never meet again. Explaining further would be a spoiler, but I think you get the idea. It’s a pleasure to have you as a reader.
With the passage of time and with new experiences he will become stronger.