_CosmicVoid_

ok he just killed two marines, even though he arrived in the world of one piece less than an hour ago, unless he is a psychopath, or the system somehow affects his mentality, this character development is quite exaggerated, he killed the pirate who attacked him I understand, not to mention that pirates in the world of one piece are a bunch of scum, with few being adventurers like the straw hats,

Honestly, that's why I don't like characters who hold back and don't fight with everything they have, since because he held back to not show his skills, two members of his team died, and in his place I would feel guilty knowing that two people who followed my command died because of me, since he had more than enough strength to kill the enemy team, taking into account the speed and ease with which he killed the jounnin from Stone Village.

In other words, a slave who follows an order that you know is wrong and inhumane, using the excuse of being a soldier, who claims to execute justice.

Please note that everything I wrote is based on the 31 chapters I read. If I change my mind after these 31, it will depend on how the story unfolds. Honestly, this is a fanfic that surprised me. When I read the synopsis and started reading the first few chapters, I didn't find it interesting. But after I read a few more chapters, the story started to develop and I found myself more and more interested in reading the next chapter. I was even sad when I read the last chapter and there was nothing left, ha ha ha ha. Pros: 1. The story develops in a way that doesn't leave the reader bored. 2. The MC is an intelligent protagonist, who even with limited information about the anime, chooses the best options available to him and his team. 3. The protagonist is really serious and realistic, and doesn't make jokes or act like a child, besides not having any over-the-top systems or abilities. 4. The story really shows the cruelty and seriousness of the Naruto anime. This point can be positive or negative depending on the person. 5. A very good translation, with few errors, and even the errors do not hinder the understanding of the reading. 6. It has elaborate scenarios and detailed descriptions of the fights. Negative points 1. Few chapters so far, ha ha ha ha, honestly so far there are no negative points, if this story is not a translation, please author do not turn this into a harem or romance, and no, I am not a bitter and sad person who hates romance, well, maybe I hate harem, but the point is that not all stories or fanfics should have romance or harem, an example of this would be One Piece, imagine if the creator Eiichiro Oda created One Piece but instead of focusing on adventure he focused on romance, in my opinion it would change One Piece completely, some may find it cool while others may not.

If this cheesy drama continues, this story will only get more and more boring. I'm not an expert in writing fanfics, but every time a writer writes a fanfic that is too different from the original story's style, it becomes boring. For example, One Piece, which is an anime that focuses a lot on adventure and action. So, an author creates a One Piece fanfic that focuses on comedy, leaving adventure and action aside. The story may even be well written, but the reader who watched or followed the anime, if he reads the fanfic, will feel strange reading the story, and I know that One Piece has a lot of comedy scenes, but comedy is not the main focus.

ha ha ha, ok Aizen is indeed very strong, but saying that Zephyr, the chief instructor of the One Piece Navy who is probably as strong as an admiral at his peak and taking the timeline that the story showed that he is at his peak, has to take a fight seriously against someone who has 1% of Aizen's capacity (strength, speed, endurance, techniques, reatsu and experience) is a lot of exaggeration, if it was only 10% of Aizen's capacity I would even agree but 1% no, maybe if it was Aizen from the Thousand Year War 1% could make someone with the strength of an admiral take the fight a little more seriously, but Aizen before the Hogyoko didn't, and before anyone comes to tell me that Aizen's reatsu is pressuring Zephyr, you have to remember that to reach the strength and level of an admiral it is not only talent, but also a lot of willpower. not counting HAKI (Busoshoku, Kenbunshoku) which is a power that comes from the individual's spiritual energy, and if Zephyr were to compete with other strong beings in haki he would be at least 6/10 of what has been shown so far in the anime, especially Busoshoku haki, so this level of reatsu would not put pressure on him,

Seriously, I had a small hope that it would be a good story, but as always I was wrong, very wrong. I didn't find any flaws in the quality of the translation, which I give a 10. But what made me give up on the story is its lack of logic. As soon as I finished reading the 5th chapter, I already had an idea of ​​what kind of story it was. Someone with the strength and skill that Mc has in the 5th chapter could simply run away from Konoha.

Could this seal affect an Ōtsutsuki? I may be wrong but I think this seal would not affect him since he has the rinnegan and one of the "paths" of the rinnegan provides a great increase in the Yin attribute of the bearer.

Phew, thank goodness, if he said he was jealous of Naruto I would stop reading now.

Seriously, I find this kind of thinking pathetic, which in my opinion portrays the weaknesses and pettiness of an individual who thinks he is superior or better than others through manipulation. Again, this is just my opinion, taking this personality trait of Mc's out of the equation, it is one of the best stories that knows how to work with comedy, and look, I don't even really like comedy stories.