VowOfLust

COUGH COUGH, Goku Black Arc they would've been screwed, COUGH

You only get such a low score mainly due to your writing being awful, I'm not gonna sugarcoat it because then you wouldn't learn from it. This entire story sounds like it was written by an 8-year-old. I suggest using either Grammarly or QuillBot Ai, they don't instantly make your writer better, but they can scan your text tell you what's wrong, and give you ideas on how to improve.

it's my username on YouTube, should I change it?

There was a small time skip. The first few chapters served as the introduction arc, and now we are onto the full story. Let me know how I could possibly improve the story and my writing <3

shhhhh

Money is traceable when used since they specifically have a code on them. With Drugs, someone can reverse engineer it create the formula, and change it to be better. Which makes for a better product to sell.

looks just like mr fr

This is what he looks like

trying my hardest bro, I'm trying to change the Frieza & Cold fight, to be a fight and not one-sided to show off Piccolo, Tien and Vegeta

Na, He still slightly has Vegeta's personality, which wouldn't work well with some of the females in dragon ball. So the Harem will be appropriate size while allowing the Z-Fighters to also have their own relationships, cause fr my boy Tien deserved a gf/wife