mtgh

not good

I prefer just the MC POV, but this is just preference, you do what you find best.

tempting

I have a doubt, so his system steal the talent of the person ?

yep good dad, happy to see this.

I don't think this "lesson" is necessary, it seems to me to be more like bullying. The "criticisms" he made of the MC don't make sense.

I do not know if this is the best option, she will be like kakashi with low chakras, if she has a quality like huge amount of chakra why throw it away ? you could add skill for her which would help her like the others.

Srry, I am a idiot

can somebody tell me the name of raw version ? .

nope. Ace mother sacrificed herself for her son, Robin mother left her. There is no comparison.