huhuhu_2886

interesting chapter 1. alluring dialog opening. no grammar problems as of yet.

chapter 1 review. I don't see any grammar problem or spelling. it's a dynamic chapter 1. with a beginning for grabbing attention.

synopsis and chapter 1 review. there is something introducing in the way you wrote your synopsis. I don't see any spelling and grammar errors in chapter 1.

chapter 1, there's no problem with the grammar and spelling as far as I've fast read.