PrimordialStarGaze

I good novel but you must have patience and willing to read and think about the side characters and also have a slight interest in war and so on

Perfect Title

I shall state the reasons for my score but before that I will say it is a very beautifully written novel and you should give it a Read before reading further to not build any prejudice. The problems: 1. The Realms though i understand they are only a beginning and mortal realms but still it shouldn't be left untouched and undocumented , though I understand if the author doesn't want it but I wish that atleast an explanation or even an INFO dump chapters wouldn't be bad { ATLEAST stuff like why is the name of realms as such , the reason and basis for losing of powers during Primal desolation Realm, the Key factors like increase in lifespan, health, rejuvenation possibility and so on. the Grades of Artifacts { their uniqueness}, and so on. 2. The fact that the power basis and some common stuff like the presence of more aura nodes leads to what, the power differences between the races the reason for the dominance of humanity on Gaia and the perks of the Underworld and many More{ these things are something That if the author pays a little attention and drops comments in chapters will make the story a lot lot filled and strong not hollow like now. 3. The integration of Pantheons was Not something that I liked since It made the story a little confusing and broke the concepts of gods since their inheritors are littered around. Spoilers: 4. ONE of the main problems is the presence of NYX in the story and the constant interaction between the protagonist and her { I am not against it but it feels a lot problematic as the stuff is like ONE is at the peak and knows everything and maybe even planned everything like a game , A GOD OF A HIGHER DIMENSION while other is an ANT} . The author HIGHLIGHTS THE problem when it is revealed that the ALL the god stones of GOD OF Darkness are in her possession and IT Shows that the MC himself is not in any control of his LIFE and maybe just a pawn in her games and IT HURTS Whatever the author had made of his image early on. KINDLY Take them to mind and refine your craft and the Novel , wish you success for your future endeavors.

The problems I have are: 1. the problems with the realm Lord: He is shown to have developed a system,search fxn , a communication device, a store ... MY QUESTION IS THAT ARE ALL IMMORTALS IN YOUR STORY THAT DUMB??? CAN THEY NOT DO THIS SIMPLE SHIT, I CAN NOT EVEN FATHOM THAT THE OTHER WORLD GODS allow the use of the system by their descendants, no trading societies ( I could understand that his business and services hold more advantages due to it being the realm lord and the fact that it has direct correction to the Realm Tree) 2. the way the REALMN TREE is being influenced , Do You not think that a being who sees and notices everything in a Realm isn't so unfathomably smart and is easily influenced, just a ORINGIN cycle The realm tree will know things that the Realm Lord can't even Fathom. 3. The lacking number of World gods due to the fact that the sovereign is essentially immortal and they could just slowly climb up, yeah there will be less and less the higher you go but the fact that the Origin essence can be obtained by a select few every origin cycle and that the no. of world gods not seeking to destroy the realm is bizarre. 4. the loop holes in the planning of the MC such that he is not prudent enough not smart enough and The haughtiness, the lack of considerations about the Realm lord the Realm Tree looking through all his antics and so on , ufff These are enough to break a lot of world premises and downgrade the story.

I generally don't write bad reviews , only when the story turns from its inititial higher grade in its aspects , I Do so. The reasons : 1.) the concepts of affinities baffle me. How can one someone who controls space not control every matter in existence+ space and time are weaved together in fabric in atleast in our universe so yes one's manipulation of space and gravity is itself time ( atleast with enough gravity) . one who can manipulate fire should be able to wield water , ... as manipulation of fire is the manipulation of atoms, there rxns and photons or other forms of energy and if at a higher one should be able to manipulate gravity and space . ( think of the reasons yourself) 2. The breaking of talent celling and the importance of Life ranks. ( the strongest characters in the story at the 10th rank should 1 in a billion or 100 million but just after 300 chapters we begin to see that every bloody one has that talent, the concept itself breaks the notions previously set . The thing that was the final screw was that a 9 year child had more talent , bla bla bla , the concepts that crownstar life rank being so easy to attain 3. Utter nonsensical abilities and aspects like the Ability to touch upon souls , even absorb them , the ability of people to have Soul bound weapons ( it literally makes whatever the author pedestal and prestige put the WARGRAVE family , to just vanish) , Not to mention affinities like Nebula and so on. 4. The lack of runes , idk how the author thinks it is cool that the world lacks any semblence of runes or other ways to manipulate the energy, the idea becomes a flaw in design when we come to Training rooms in the Academy and the estate . I have more to say but this much shall suffice. The author has not thought deeply about the world itself.

I made a account just to review this. The story is of a simp, idiot, dumb character MC . He is led around by the female characters, he talks to the heroes and makes it up to them and says to leave the past in the past thing he is powerles, stupid and led around by females. DO NOT GET BAITED BY THE TITLE

Shitty and weasel novel and the MC is not a villain and is weak minded , the title is deceiving. 1.Mc character is worst 2. Not interesting 3. Weak and brain dead