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While not the greatest of updaters and writing style can be subjective. The world they are giving to their readers is creative and fun non the less. I am easily captivated and can't argue with the fact the creator knows what he wants and can clearly tell a story where I can turn my brain off and just read without any problem or clear confusion. I hope to see what else this story holds, but otherwise I can appreciate what is being drawn out in this fishy little world being composed before me.

I like your creative use of systems here making me want to continue reading, I felt it was pretty exciting and great use of characters.

It was a nice simple chapter, I see some repeat words, but easily remedied. I like the world you are trying to paint, I hope your writing journey goes well! Very good start ^^

Fay, this is Orange. I hope you are doing okay...

Delz once again creating a marvelous book, this one being intense with an MC (Finn) who we can relate to and seeing the downfall of the earth taken over and becoming the gamer he was online. I like that Finn had to learn to work fast and hard to survive and adapting quickly to his surroundings! I am excited to see where this goes and happy to see a new story! xD