Mrs_Makima

Nice story, I'll give it 7/10. Even though the story felt a bit rushed at starting, this fanfiction is even better than the original story in writing! Unlike other writers who follow system or webnovel's trend, you follow your own creativity, trying to create a peak fanfiction instead of getting views. Here's what I liked about your novel: - Fighting Scenes - Unpredictability & suspense - Dark theme - Character design For now, only 32 chapters are published. I have so many expectations for this novel, I hope you won't disappoint us.

6.7/10 in writing. 9.5/10 enjoyment. 9/10 panels

Author-sama, I liked your novel. I've just read 12 chapters but the story is perfect. I wanna give my honest review and things that I didn't like so much. Let's start. First of all, the quality of the writing is really good. However, there are some moments where the writing could be perfect. For example, it seems like you've overreacted in the 11th chapter. You had the mindset of an adult but you acted like an immature kid. It was cute yet annoying. Secondly, the system ruined my interest. I know you've already mentioned the system but the Demon Slayer series doesn't fit for the system. At last, some characters such as Tanjuro and Kokushibo didn't act like they should. They were more like an oc to me. Their characters are different from the actual series. PS: Why did Muzan even call the other upper moons just for the kitsune girl? The Upper Moon meeting is so rare that it happens in centuries. But this fanfic is one of the best Demon Slayer fanfictions for me. Great work, Author-sama.