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DaoistnNdKoa

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  • DaoistnNdKoa
    DaoistnNdKoaa day ago
    に返信 Kqro

    I mean the bodies, not knowing English is very troublesome, my friend.

  • DaoistnNdKoa
    DaoistnNdKoaa day ago
    に返信 Kqro

    Will there be two sizes of MC? If so, I don't want to read about it because come on man, who would read such a ridiculous idea? I only read the look for Vasco, so I need to know if there are two sizes.

  • DaoistnNdKoa
    DaoistnNdKoaa day ago
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    I didn't think he would go there before his preparations were finished. He went to the enemy base and set the scene. This episode satisfied me a lot. And since it progressed so fast, it seems like there will be characters like bad jerry in the future. Anyway, this episode was a perfect taste. I'm looking forward to the other episodes. Thanks for the episode.

  • DaoistnNdKoa
    DaoistnNdKoaa day ago
    に返信 Concept_Author

    The opinions of other readers are also important, of course I don't know how much you will progress the story, I hope it takes a long time, but I think after belittling Jerry so much, very nice scenes can emerge with dialogues, and my friend, your quality is already very good, when the dialogues increase, the story will be even more attractive, I'm sure this will tire you a little, but please bear with us, it's very difficult to find a good Rick and Morty fan fiction, good work. 🫡🫡

  • DaoistnNdKoa
    DaoistnNdKoaa day ago
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    It's a really interesting fan fiction. So far everything is good but I think it's progressing too fast. It says slow steps but it's not too slow. Another thing I complain about is the lack of dialogues. For example, he reincarnated but Morty Summer never has a dialogue with Betty and this kills the liveliness. It would be much better if it was a little more detailed. Other than that, I really liked it. If there are other Rick and Morty fan fictions like this, I'm open to suggestions.

  • DaoistnNdKoa
    DaoistnNdKoaa day ago
    コメント

    I liked it but the story moves too fast

  • DaoistnNdKoa
    DaoistnNdKoa3 days ago
    に返信 rimuru_sama

    It is ironic that MC does not have the ability to hate, considering that his power is based on emotion, but after all, this is a novel without the labels of anti-hero or villain, so that much is understandable.

  • DaoistnNdKoa
    DaoistnNdKoa3 days ago
    に返信 Simply_myself

    Even though I've only read 25 chapters of this novel, I don't like the relationship between Leon and MC. It's weird for an MC whose powers are emotions to be so friendly. I'm not even talking about what Leon did in the first chapter. I think they should have been enemies. I couldn't warm up to Leon at all.

  • DaoistnNdKoa
    DaoistnNdKoa4 days ago
    コメント

    Just tell me that my code's stepmom won't have a romantic relationship

  • DaoistnNdKoa
    DaoistnNdKoa9 days ago
    に返信 DaoistnNdKoa

    Yes, I just learned that this fan fiction is a Chinese translation with 140 chapters, but I assure you that you will not regret reading it, it is not ridiculous like other Chinese series.