Well, now that you have released around ten chapters I think I can give you an opinion.... I really like the story, I would have thought it was basic but I don't get the impression. You have a writing style of your own that I find great (you push your style very far in the last chapters that I read, I love it) The characters are very endearing and they have a personality of their own (even if I have impression that you are hiding a lot from us) and your author's notes are very funny. That's why I give you 5 stars for everything EXCEPT for the stability of updates... Indeed, you come out too randomly. However, you told us that you are trying to stabilize your posts and I am sure that you will succeed, so if you succeed I will really give you 5 stars! good luck, I can't wait for real, to read more!!

I think it's a good idea that you decide to make the chapters shorter for several reasons. The first is obviously your mental health, it will be easier to be able to regularly do chapters of 2k words rather than 5kword in a week. In addition, it's also easier to read, I understand that to start a novel long chapters are better but now that you have progressed well, short chapters are the best choice. Finally, I thank you. It's cool that you decided to try to post a chapter every other day for a week, it's really nice! Welll well, can't wait for the next chapter to come out, the plot is getting bigger and bigger!