kkm14147
In the realm of boredom, I quietly dwell, A lazy dreamer with stories to tell. Ideas flicker softly, waiting to ignite, In boredom’s embrace, I dream through the night.
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kkm1414713 hours agoに返信 LouLou2Yeah, thanks
- kkm1414714 hours agoに返信 LouLou2
'Sometimes Fate will go out of his character'- I want him to speak more like this 😂
- kkm1414714 hours agoに返信 LouLou2
Thanks for the feedback. I am getting used to writing stuff like this . I will try to improve😅😅.
- kkm1414717 hours agoに返信 LouLou2
Then I will see it in later chapters...
- kkm1414717 hours agoに返信 LouLou2
Yeah , I didn't like Hunter to some extent. I thought maybe you will use them as many Male leads in the future. Elora is a lovely side character. Her character development will be interesting in later volumes.
- kkm1414718 hours ago発表
Author here, You can ask questions regarding the novel here.
- kkm1414718 hours ago発表
World building is good. I don't know why your views are like this. Female lead's characters development is good but Ezra is also good. I like that vampires are not too overpowered like many stories. Sometimes characters would make you uncomfortable and angry but that's how they are.
- kkm1414721 hours agoコメント
I guess I read too fast 😂
- kkm14147a day ago発表
Story is too fast in the beginning. But since it's a vampire series and I believe you will go harem route later, you can improve your writing style . It's my personal advice that you should edit your earliest chapter again. The story has potential and I think you're going for a short story based on your pace, it will turn out a good short story if try harder.
