Euthanasia, play with my life!
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the format of '<'system'> isn't really intriguing and eye catching.
Has potential, and is a _unique idea, and you seem dedicated and passionate about it, but I think some modifications are needed: 1. Add some relevant tags. Almost no one on this platform is gonna read something that doesn't have at least a few tags. besides the platform won't push and spread it out if you don't set it. 2. I can't differ which text is for the system and which text is the narrative; I mean put the system on a format like a common one is just putting the system commands or prompts or status between '[ 'system' ] or something like that. keep it up!
in a good way or bad...
Here's a mistake. the first pack is 'weapons'. right now both are 'accessories'
I mean 'makeshift weapons' buff.
I've never seen that before. Interesting. 👍
great start! let there be massacre!
I already know this is gonna be splendid just considering who the author is. you may regret not reading this!
LOL, believe what you will. he maybe more than that. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ᵐᵃʸᵇᵉ
Yeah. kinda...