Damaker
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Although the plot is well written, I suggest you use something like italics or a short vertical line to differentiate a thought from a conversation. Moreover, each paragraph is too lengthy which makes those with bad eyesight feel dizzy when reading. Overall, it's an excellent work. Keep up the good work!!
Thanks very much, buddy!
*Corrected. Thanks buddy.
He's a normal human lol
Hahahaha. He's yet to be a police officer. So, him possessing a real gun would be deemed illegal.
Remember he was a high-ranked police officer in his previous life? he was mostly trained for that purpose.
Remember he was a high-ranked police officer in his previous life? he was mostly trained for that purpose.
A laser gun?