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make it 82 , I think he would be in icu after playing a match and receiving classic premier league tackles
keep up the good job
I think the idea of not getting involved in a physical relationship with kendall is a mature decision . Why lead someone to a house you know they can't enter .
why the hell was aarav not playing but Hardik Pandya was , I just can understand the logic . The story is getting massively boring because author don't knows when he should stop nerfing mc . When we said we want india to win 2019 wc or the final to have a super over , we didn't mean it to watch it on display while sitting with mc because we wanted mc to be playing in the tournament . Hardik Pandya's selection while aarav doesn't make sense. Stop nerfing aarav as much as you have been doing because it depleting the potential and quality .
Make it so Rhaenys and rhaegar get married; Rhaenys Targaryen is far too precious and far too good for the adulterous, ambitious ,power thirsty Corlys Velaryon - who will see her as nothing but a way to raise house Velaryon in power and Rhaenys will be a mere broodmare to him . Secure Rhaenys Targaryen for Rhaegar.
meh......it was too forced man
toru or mina
Go for Nebra. A spoilt tsundere brat's redemption arc. Make so that she will see through herself as one of the remaining parts of Acier's legacy and honour it by pursuing excellence . Basically a little more spoilt Noelle with more tsundereness and a little obsessive towards mc.
Now this is going down the drain . You just diminished the character of aarav . Now he will be known as disciple of sachin and that he was able to become great because of sachin and not because of himself . This story has gotten really boring . You should have shown us a better journey that he should have covered on his own like other greats like Sachin , Brian Lara , virat , dhoni etc. I mean he already has a system supporting why would you wanna go in that "Master-Disciple lane" this is something that is just not sachin or any other great would do. Because if you are pursuing not just greatness but also excellence then there is a certain sense of self-pride present there where you want to cover distance by yourself . I would ask you to re-edit this chapter and take a short break to rearrange your thoughts about how you want to pursue this story . There's one thing you are getting tips from a certain someone who has more experience and skills in whatever field you are but getting totally understand his tutelage will diminish the character because he didn't travel that journey by himself . Please take this into consideration .
Now it's seriously getting really boring , mate. 324 chapters later he has done what 2-3 movies . Everything is too detailed , details that are not needed to be known . overemphasising the non important things. Please change the writing style .